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Some people Consider that it is better to gift money to teenager as a present while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In present
scenorio
an outline or synopsis of a play (or, by extension, of a literary work)
scenario
,
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,
money
play
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plays
 a vital role in
everyone
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everyone's
 life without
money
 we cannot buy
anythings
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any things
. There are split opinions
reagarding
with regard or relation to
regarding
topic
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the topic
topics
,
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,
abound individuals believe that gave a
gift
money
 to children is the positive point
,
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,
while another group of thinkers are against of
this
trend
. In my opinion
,
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,
the former proposition appears to be more rational.
This
 essay will
further
 elaborate both positive and negative effects of
this
trend
 and
thus
 will lead to a logical conclusion. To start with
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there are myriad of reasons which will
further
 elaborate
this
 argument
,
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,
but the most preponderant on stems from the fact that
gaving
have or possess, either in a concrete or an abstract sense
having
 the
gift
money
 to children is
better
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the best
gift
 for
themselfes
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
. Because many children are hobby to save the
money
 and after children utilize for good purposes like as, some juniors buy books as well as toys own their choices and some save
money
 use when they stuck in any problem.
Futhermore
in addition
Furthermore
,
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,
another
pivotel
being of crucial importance
pivotal
 aspect of
this
trend
 is that abound families gave pocket
money
 to children and kids save
money
 after receiving
gift
money
.
Therefore
, they do not like totally depend on parents and if,
their
in or at that place
there
 are do
this
 there burden are reduce on families.Needless to say
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,
all these merits stand in a good stead.
However
,
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,
the latter view
suggest
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suggests
 that there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of
this but
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this, but
 one of the most alarming
one
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ones
 is that gave a
gift
money
 is
totally negative point
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a totally negative point
 on children.
This
 is to express
,
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,
some descendents use
gift
money
 for bad purposes and they buy bad things and learn bad habits.
Hence
,
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,
it is apparent why many are against
this
trend
. In the
nuttshell
the shell around the kernel of a nut
nutshell
nut-shell
,
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,
nevertheless
,
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,
weighing the both the options
,
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,
I believe that there is no single conclusion still
,
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,
I take
this
 ground the effective clap
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require as useful, just, or proper
require
 use of both hands.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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