Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

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playing computer games only has negative effect on children. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many countries today the retirement age from work has been raised. Do the advantages of raising the retirement age outweigh the disadvantages?