In cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem. What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?

In the
last
two decades the range of
traffic
is significantly increasing across the world which is becoming a global issue. In
this
essay the causes of
this
trend will be
analyzed
examined carefully and methodically; broken down for consideration of constituent parts
analysed
with some practical solutions to reduce the
traffic
volume. People tend to use their own cars
instead
of
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
with
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by
public transportation because of some reasons. One of the main
reason
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reasons
is that some transports,
such
as buses must take a long route to a destination to pick up passengers, which can make the journey too time-consuming for
people
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people, however
however
, to choose cars in order to
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
, can give a good chance to people to save a great deal of time
.
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.
Furthermore
,
transport
can become
duty
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a duty
and crowded
that is
not a congenial ambiance for
travelers
a person who changes location
travellers
even, it can pose unpleasant consequences for people.
For example
, nowadays,
coronavirus
is widespread in the world and
this
virus can be highly contagious in crowded places because just during a
day hundreds
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day, hundreds
of people use the transports the virus can pass with touching
from
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of
one person to another. Another intrinsic reason of
traffic
is that some roads of cities do not meet the standards which can become nasty
obstruction
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obstructed
for drivers and
also
it can protract the
traffic
. In other word, most of the streets in some cities are narrow and few cars can pass through them simultaneously.
Moreover
, bad carriageway conditions can cause
traffic
accidents that
also
can limit the moving of vehicles on the roads. There
are
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is
a plethora possible
solutions
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solution
to solve the problem and one of them is to apply fast
transport
methods,
such
as modern trains which can accelerate its speed more than previous versions which makes it possible to minimize the time of the journey.
Also
,
government
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the government
can generate special and greatly constructed roads for public
transport
and it will enhance the service of carrying because these roads will help to reduce the load of common highways and with
this
way people will reach the destination in time and because of the new type of
transport
system the crowded will become sparse,
therefore
,
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,
danger
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the danger
of disease-related viruses will be solved. In conclusion, it is evident that the solutions of
transport
and road problems can diminish gridlock in the world.
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