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The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.
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The table illustrates some details (date opened,
kilometers
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 of route,
passengers
 per year) about underground
railway
 systems of different cities.
Overall
, what stands out from
this
 table is that the earliest available underground
railway
system
 was in London,
while
 the
last
subway
 was opened in Los Angeles.
By contrast
, the smallest
distance
 and the lowest number of
passengers
 were observed in Kyoto. Looking at the table in more
details
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, in 1863 the underground railroad
system
 was put into operation in London which
it
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was the first
subway
 to use in comparison with other subways.
This
 transportation
recieved
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received
 775
million
passengers
 per year for carrying them to their destination at a
distance
 of 394
kilometers
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. After 37 years, the
next
 underground
railway
system
 was opened in Paris. The route of
this
subway
 experienced
with
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199
kilometers
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 which
was
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 twice as high as that of
underground
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railway
system
 in London.
Furthermore
, the
second
 largest number of
subway
 users was in Paris, which
was
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accounted for 1191
million
. Tokyo established its underground railroad
system
 in 1927. The big difference can be seen between the
quantity
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 of
passengers
 and
distance
 with 155
kilometers
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 and 1927
million
 respectively. The subsequent
subway
 was opened in Washington in 1976 which was able to go
a way
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away
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 taken in getting from a starting point to a destination with 126
kilometers
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.
This
 underground
railway
system
 with 144
million
 had less user capacity than previously mentioned subways. After only 5 years, Kyoto created
opportunity
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an opportunity
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 of utilizing
their
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its
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 own underground
railway
system
. The route of
this
subway
 was responsible for 11
kilometers
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, which was the smallest
distance
 compared to the routes of other underground railroad systems. The
last
subway
 was opened in Los Angeles in 2001
that
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this
 underground
railway
system
 had 28
kilometers
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 range and 50
million
 passenger capacity
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words kilometers, passengers, railway, system, subway, distance, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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