The diagram below shows information about member attendance at various clubs in a metro city. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart
indicate
information about Change the verb form
indicates
member
Add an article
a member
to
four different clubs in a metro city for Change preposition
of
a
seven months starting from Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
January
to July.
Overall
, the most notable point is that,
the highest number of visitors Remove the comma
apply
observed
in the American club in the Add a missing verb
was observed
Month
of June, while
the lowest number of people visited Japanese staff in the month
of January
.
As it is recorded from the data, the presence of French staff is around 68,000 in January
, it inclined to almost 78,000 in the month
of July. The least number of citizen visits in
Japanese staff, Change preposition
by
the
observed at 38,000 and Correct article usage
apply
the
Change preposition
at the
ending
of the Replace the word
end
month
it rises
slightly by 4,000.
Among all clubs, the Wrong verb form
risen
attending
of British club all over in the Replace the word
attendance
month
of January
61,000
and it rises to Add a missing verb
was 61,000
the
July by slightly and end Correct article usage
apply
in
64,000.
The showing Change preposition
at
of
American club is the most popular amongst the resident over the given period in a metro city. It is recorded Change preposition
apply
highest
total of visitors in June is around 97,000 and settles at about 84,000 in July.Add an article
the highest
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