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It ıs generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or musıc, and others are not. however, ıt ıs sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musıcıan. dıscuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Talented people ar
e knows a
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are known
are knowing
know
s gifted and they are often successful on
s
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in
pecific fields
such
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 as music, sports or paintings. These people ha
ve been having t
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were having
hese talents since they were born.
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, I argue that they should be supported to be higher positions by educating.
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, even if some people do not have any quality to become expert of
t
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in
hese fields they can learn and grow themselves by getting go
od
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a good education
education
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. In my opinion, every person can improve themselves on a subject which they are interested in.
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 with, gifted people are very lucky because they have ab
ility t
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the ability
an ability
o do a particular
field
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 and they may be successful musicians, artist or sp
ort p
the activity of providing for or maintaining by supplying with money or necessities
support
erson.
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, they should recognize it when they were child to enhance their abilities because there is cr
itical time t
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a critical time
the critical time
o learn things in
education
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.
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; children can learn reading or writing easier than adults.
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, being talented might not enough to be successful in a domain, On the other hands, gifted people may need
education
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.
On the other hand
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, people who are not talented can be successful on
a
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in
field
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 by learning.
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, they should be interested in the
field
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. If the
field
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 do
not become a
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does not become
ttractive to those people, learning would be challenging for them. There are many ce
nters w
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
hich give lessons to people about different subjects
such
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 as instrument, language, or art. Many people could learn them by attending to these lessons. To sum up, being gi
fted person i
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a gifted person
s go
od thing t
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a good thing
o be go
od p
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the best
osition on their ca
reers but t
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careers, but
hey should supply their talents with high quality
education
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.
However
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, people do not need any talent to achieve in a domain, they can
also
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 be successful by learning. In my opinion, people who are interested in any subject should fo
llows t
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follow
heir wishes.

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