Governments spend a lot of money on public celebrations such as national holidays and public festivals .Some people say that the government spends too much on this and that they should use this money on other useful things .Do you agree or disagree.

Needless to say
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pubic celebrations and
history
plays a vital role in each and everyone's
life
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Thus
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high
greater than normal in degree or intensity or amount
High
authorities invest
large amount
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large amounts
a large amount
of
money
on public events
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However
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few individuals believe that the regime had better spend some funds of
this
money
on other useful things
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I agree with
this
perception and
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the
subsequent clauses. There are
plethora
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a plethora
of reasons behind
this
trend
that
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that's
why government spends a lot of
money
on public celebrations like national holidays and public festivals
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To begin
with
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there are some dates which
brings
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bring
worth place in each and everyone's
life
as
such
dates are
relatedto
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related to
our
history
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examplify
be characteristic of
exemplify
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15th
august
the month following July and preceding September
August
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1945 is very
vaulable
having great material or monetary value especially for use or exchange
valuable
date in our
life
because
on
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of
at
in
about
by
that time
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our country got freedom thanks to
struggler
an energetic attempt to achieve something
struggle
as martyrs Bhagat Singh
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Rajguru
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Sukhdev
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they sacrifice their lives for
country
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the country
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Furthermore
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another important reason is that it is
best way
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the best way
to spreading knowledge about
history
and
cuture
a particular society at a particular time and place
culture
along with
tradition
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traditional
among
new generation
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the new generation
celebrating public events like national holidays and pubic festivals
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they may get knowledge about their past happenings which can help to them in order to associate with their
history
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Apart from
this
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they can gain knowledge about how our ancestors
scrificed
endure the loss of
sacrificed
sacrifice
their lives for independence of our country
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That is
why
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high authorities spend
lion's share
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the lion's share
of
money
on public ceremonies
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For instance
, republic day
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independence day and so on
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Hence
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having ruminated
aforestation
the conversion of bare or cultivated land into forest (originally for the purpose of hunting)
afforestation
information
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it can be concluded that though public festivals
plays
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play
a paramount role in
human'
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human life, but
human life but
human' life but
life
but regime ought to invest some bucks on
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
purposes
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According to my point of view
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another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
useful purposes
also
play an important role in general
public's
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public
life
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  • allocate funds
  • cultural heritage
  • national pride
  • balanced approach
  • stimulate local economies
  • social cohesion
  • fostering social harmony
  • opportunity costs
  • address crucial issues
  • effective governance
  • public funds
  • overall societal benefit
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