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The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

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Internet
 has a great impact on
Information
 technology and on our daily life. There is no question that
internet
Suggestion
the internet
 has improved our
access
 to
information
 greatly, but the question is how extended we has to use it.
Information
 technology has changed a lot in 21th century. In fact, it is the biggest revolution in
this
 century. Credit goes to
internet
, changed the
way
 of
access
 to
information
. Now a day, we can do anything using
internet
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the internet
, best example is e-commerce which revolutionised the shopping experience. We can buy matchbox to
mansion
a remark that calls attention to something or someone
mention
 in
internet
. When it comes to
information
, it is at its best. We can know about anything current politics to history of countries, online lectures to live movies what's not? The whole globe is our hands. There are a lot of examples in my life that's how it is influenced and increased the
access
 to
information
. In my Master's, I'm writing thesis regarding "String theory" and I struggled to get references on
this
 theory in my university library.
Then
 I went through
internet
Suggestion
the internet
 to find some previous works and I found nearly ten fantastic journals on
this
 theory. I can't even imagine my work, and today's world without
internet
.
However
, there are some pitfalls that can easily raise a debate on usage of
internet
. Especially the children's exposure to adult content in
internet
 which is a real issue in today's society. It is influencing teenager's behaviour a wild
way
. There are a lot reports supporting
this
 issue. Many countries are trying to ban
access
of
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to
this
 content, but it is very hard seems like almost impossible. The only
way
 to stop
this
 is to create awareness in parents and teenagers, so we can control in a friendly environment. To conclude, every coin has two sides,
internet
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the internet
 has changed the
way
 people
access
information
 at the same time created some new issues, so we should know the limits of usage.
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