You recently received letter from your friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In this letter Say why he would not enjoy going to college Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him /her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him /her

Dear Ayo, How’ve you been? It was a pleasure to hear from you after a long time! Hope you’re enjoying life after high school? I’m writing

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to give you my opinion regarding the path I think will suit you, as you are done in high school. Rather than going to college, I think it’s better you work.

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is because college rules are too stringent for a free-spirited person like you.

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, you’ll have to get a part-time job while schooling, as you currently have no scholarships. Another option is getting a loan. Either way, you’ll spend

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most of your hours working or life after school paying debt, which is not a life I think you want. Working at

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a young age will afford you the opportunity to move up the career ladder quickly.

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, you’ll

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be able to pay up your mum’s nursing home bills, which keeps accumulating by the year. I’d suggest that you apply for jobs with the skill set you have now, which is data analysis.

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specialization is a booming one in the labour market and I think you have a real shot at making a difference there. Better still, you could apply for jobs that border on computational skills. Most jobs in that industry are

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quite flexible and job flexibility is something you’ve always craved for. I hope I was able to answer all your questions and point you in the right direction. I look forward to having that wonderful vacation we planned

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year! With love, Ola.