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People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen. What is your opinion about an ideal society? How can we create an ideal society?

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The people rarely think about a dream
society
 which they expect
that is
 too perfect to create it and become reality. For me, an ideal
community
 is really safe, brings a huge of benefits and equal to all of the residents.
This
 essay will present about a perfect
society
 and how
to make
Suggestion
making
 it happen. On the one hand, an ideal
community
 is a place that people can get all the basic benefits of a resident.
To begin
 with, they would have a fairly
life
 accommodation and have a job to get a enough salary to pay for their
life
such
 as the clothes, foods and other activities.
Moreover
, the
society
, which have a low rate of criminals, the thief and robber, is
also
 a part of perfect one.
Besides
, all the children are available to go to school and studied with a high quality of education. For the children who have their own talent, will be trained and improved to have a better future
life
. All kids’ tuition fees would be paid by the governments, the medical fees
also
, so their parents will not have any financial burden about paying those fees
such
 as in German and other Europe countries.
On the other hand
, there are some several ways to create a perfect
community
.
Initially
, the government needs to develop the nation’s economic because when they have a good finances, all the training and studying courses of the kids are paid.
Then
 the official would create a significant number of job opportunities for the poor, disable and homeless people by opening the factories and manufactured places. That will have those residents generate the stability incomes, so they can pay for the individuals from the government. When they have a stable
life
, the proportion of crime in the
community
 is decreased. To sum up, it has difficulty in making a dream
society
 in the real
life
, but it is able to improve the
life
 in the present becomes better.

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