Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn the language. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The Italian school system has concerned to insert the study of English as
second
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a second language
language
since about the 70s in order to make population be able in communication with foreigners.
Firstly English
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Firstly, English
language
was learnt in secondary schools,
then
in upper schools and since about 25 years in the primary schools too. In our school programs, English is taught in different ways depending on the levels.
Firstly it
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Firstly, it
is based on the rules of the grammar and the basic functions of the communication gradually developing the several levels of skills in listening, writing, speaking and reading. In
this
way, children can get the elementary abilities in speaking
this
foreign
language
and
then
they can develop higher rates.
Nevertheless in
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Nevertheless, in
our school, teachers learn English with many devices, disposable in our times thanks to the modern ebook that permit to stay in a classroom but in a complete full immersion in the
anglophone
world.
Therefore I
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Therefore, I
believe that it is not sufficient if someone would learn the
language
in a complete way. So it is very useful studying in an English-speaking country because with mother-tongue teachers it will be possible to improve the accent, a better pronunciation, the skills and mainly the fluidity in oral communication by speaking with local idioms. In conclusion, I might agree with
this
statement, but I believe
that is
also
relevant the fact that studying in other countries' requests a high need of money and nowadays just a certain part of students could permit to study abroad.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • immersion
  • fluency
  • advanced
  • communicate
  • accommodate
  • exposure
  • cultural understanding
  • native speakers
  • educational institutions
  • resources
  • diverse
  • globalized
  • interact
  • self-study
  • online courses
  • tutors
  • language exchange
  • books
  • videos
  • podcasts
  • language proficiency
  • language barrier
  • conversation partners
  • progress
  • motivated
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