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The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think that this will lead to English becoming the only langusge to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

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It is true that English is the most important
language
 for the development of
tourism sector
Suggestion
the tourism sector
. Some people believe that English is widely spoken now-a-days, for
this
 understanding and economic growth is possible. But, even though, it has advantages, there are lots of disadvantages too.
This
 essay will discuss both the parts. English is considered to be the only international
language
 in the
world
. If it is spoken by globally,
then
 definitely, there would be some benefits.
Firstly
, people understand their feelings each other by speaking
one
language
 only.
This
 understanding will help not only countries but all people throughout the
world
 which would promote learning, the flow of information and ideas.
Secondly
, the economic factor in the
tourism
 would get promoted only by speaking English. With all people speaking the same
language
, there will be less barriers and
therefore
, the trade will flourish between countries, resulting in a healthier
world
 economy.
On the other hand
, there are several disadvantages for having only
one
 spoken
language
.
First
 off, only
one
language
 means the gradual disappearance of all other languages.
Further
, its relating matters like cultures, their joys and pleasure are
also
 vanished slowly.
Additionally
, it would be at a great loss of
tourism
, because people do not want to travel for pleasure and interest if all the countries has the same
language
 and similar cultures. In
this
 case, many countries would devastate economically those who based on
tourism
 as a source of income. In conclusion, though there are lots of advantages and disadvantages of having
one
language
, yet we can say that English should be taken as a a spoken
language
language
 globally, but, at the same time we cannot ignore the local languages and cultures. These should be prioritised to ensure a rich
world
 heritage for future generations.
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