Write a letter to your local council that the road in front of your house is damaged. In your letter, you should: • tell him your name and where you are living • describe the problem • suggest what you want him to do for it.

#council #road #front #house #name

Dear Sir or Madam,

This

letter is regarding the damage of

road

in front of my house in HSR Layout in Bangalore, I want to bring your attention to

this

calamity faced by many residents

near by

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including me. To introduce myself, I am Sumant, resident of HSR Layout, Bangalore, I stay in

apartment

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an apartment

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named ‘Sepal’ it is in south Bangalore. I have been staying here

since

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for

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last

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12 years. Along with my apartment, there are many apartment complexes around. Coming to the point, the

road

nearby is damaged because of the recent development of a supermarket, but the municipality has not yet intervened to clear up the sand and stones on the

road

also

there are potholes because of wear and tear of vehicles which brought material for supermarket construction. There is atrocious traffic because of

this

mess. One feels like driving off-

road

here. To make the situation back to smooth sailing, please reach to the location at earliest, please see for yourself, how bad the

road

condition is, please take action to repair the

road

also

you will need to give the contract to some agency to do the tarring of the

road

. While taking

this

action, if you need any support, you can reach me at any time. Regards,

Sumant

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

213 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Grievance
Deterioration
Hazardous
Impede
Inconvenience
Potholes
Cracks
Collapsed
Uneven
Detour
Repair
Maintenance
Investigation
Infrastructure
Expenditure
Resolution
Improvement
Community
Resident
Safety
Convenience
Traffic congestion
Civic
Enquiry

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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