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The map shows two potential locations (S1 and s2) for a
nes
not of long duration; having just (or relatively recently) come into being or been made or acquired or discovered
new
 supermarket in a
town
 called Garlson. The main difference between the two sites is that S1 is outside the
town
, whereas S2 is in the
town
. The sites can
alos
in addition
also
 be compared in terms of access by road or rail, and
thei
people in general
they
the
,
Accept space
,
r
a unit of surface area equal to 100 square meters
are
or
positions
Suggestion
positioned
 to three smaller towns. Looking at the information in more
dteail
an isolated fact that is considered separately from the whole
detail
, S1 is in the
contryside
rural regions
countryside
country-side
 to the
nort
in a northern direction
north
North
 west of Garlsdon, but it is close to the
residental
used or designed for residence or limited to residences
residential
 area of
town
. S2 is
alos
in addition
also
 close to the
housinjg
structures collectively in which people are housed
housing
 area, which surrounds the
town
 centre. There are main roads from Hindon, Bransdon and Cransdon to Garlsdon
town
centrre
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
centres
, but
this
 is no traffic zone, sop there would be no access to S2 by car. B
conreast
, s!
lies
Suggestion
Lies
 on the main road to Hindon, but it would be more difficult to reach from Bransdon and Cransdon.
Bopth
supermarkety
a large self-service grocery store selling groceries and dairy products and household goods
supermarket
 sites are close to
rilway
Suggestion
the railway
railway
 that runs
throughh
from beginning to end
through
 Garlsdon from Hindon to Carnsdon.

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