Climate change is an issue. Do you agree with that?

#climate #change

use

public transport to arrive to my office. I am working in a university. It is close to me, so I just take

minibus

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a minibus

the minibus

. I always

use

the minibus because it takes less

time

to reach the destination via minibus.

Firstly

, it is less crowded compared to municipal busses.

Secondly

, it does not stop very often compared to the busses.

there

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There

is traffic congestion on motorways. If people were promoted to

use

public transport more, there would be less traffic on motorways, and I can arrive to my destination point in shorter

time

. I want to talk about my wireless

bluetooth

(computing, trademark) a short range wireless technology for connecting different devices such as computers and mobile phones

Bluetooth

speaker. It bough it on Amazon US because it was cheaper in US than Turkey. I ordered it almost one and half years ago. It was delivered in very short

time even

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time, even

if it was shipped from USA. I love it because it has some unique features.

For example

, it has a feature of noise cancelation, so when you put on the headphone and turn the music on, you are not disturbed by any noises. It has a feature of

bluetooth

(computing, trademark) a short range wireless technology for connecting different devices such as computers and mobile phones

Bluetooth

, so that you don't need any cable to connect it with a phone. It was easy to learn how to

use

it. Even one who is not familiar with to the technology can learn it in a short

time

. Sometimes my mother

use

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uses

it, and she doesn't face any problem while using it. People

use

washing machine,

dish washer

a machine for washing dishes

dishwasher

, drying machine

, vacuum cleaner to

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, vacuum cleaner,

clean their houses in my country. They help people much while cleaning the house because people save

time

thanks to these machines, and

also

they get less tired, but these machines may have negative impacts on

environment

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the environment

if people don't benefit from them responsibly.

For example

, if you

use

your

dish washer

a machine for washing dishes

dishwasher

more than once a day, it consumes more electricity and water. We, in the world, have a

finited

bounded or limited in magnitude or spatial or temporal extent

finite

sources of water I think, in the near future, almost all houses will be equipped with household machines at least in my country. Everybody would want to have these machines and spend less

time

on house cleaning and feel less tired.

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