Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?

There are a
number
of reasons why many historical grounds and museums cease of being fascinating for natives.
However
that may be,
this
issue can be determined by adopting a
number
of solutions, as will now be debated. Maybe the
first
reason is that those local people got used to see these historical monuments which means that they lost the concern to visit
its
the thing named or in question
it
. Because that objects and places are familiar to their cultural backgrounds.
For example
, the Registan Square welcomes thousands of
travelers
a person who changes location
travellers
from other
countries but
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countries, but
the
number
of local residents who visit the Registan Square is lower. Another reason stems from historical constructions themselves. They often seem poorly conserved due to low finances for renovation while the rich and
government
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the government
don't make
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doesn't make
an attempt to ameliorate the condition.
However
the problem can be solved by several routes.
Firstly government
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Firstly, government
can adorn and reconstruct historical monuments and make it more gorgeous.
Secondly
authorities can add new facilities for both of them.
For instance
, they can build
coffe
a beverage consisting of an infusion of ground coffee beans
coffee
shops, eateries and parks near historical monuments. To conclude, there are a
number
of reasons
such
as the condition of these sites and the lack of attractiveness
.
Accept space
.
Unless we take some steps to resolve
this
issue, we can face many
problem
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problems
. In my opinion, the main responsibility in
this
case lies with the government.
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