Some people believe that technology has made men more sociable, and others think that it has made us less sociable. Discuss both views

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In these days there are some arguable that doing modern
technology
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have been done human-being
relationship
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more
socialized but
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socialized, but
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others
believe that
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tend
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tends
have been decreasing them to less socialized onto human
relationship
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. In
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essay I will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of these viewpoints in details before the conclusion is reached. On the one hand, many people suggest that modern
technology
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have been done
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has been done
human being
relationship
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to be more socialized. It can be seen that development and
advancement
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advanced
technology
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in terms of the internet can be widespread and breakthrough us via several of social applications
such
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as
facebook
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Facebook
,
youtube
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YouTube
and so on. These social applications can lead us keep in touch each other easier, faster and more convenient. Facebook,
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, people can up-to-date, post, keep in touch in many various
kind
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kinds
of news, photos, private matter, or even communication with others by texting, voicing and video conferencing.
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of modern
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in these days could have been affected mankind livelihood to be more socialized not only being in domestic, but
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all over the world. In spite
of living different
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of living in different
continents, we could keep in touch just one clicking on electronic devices
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as smartphones and laptops to be closer and get
involve
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involved
in modern society.
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, it can be
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noticed
that some people can be isolating and less sociable due to
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advancing
advanced
technology
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. It can be seen that these days most of people tend to pay attention on
technology
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devices
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as smartphones, laptop and computer rather than conversation face-to-face with family members and surrounding friends.
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of
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issue, it can be impacted human being
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relationship
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relates
relating
to be decreasing and less socialized eventually.
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, my cousin addicted with
smartphones
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smart phones
and social application. When all of relatives come to join
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in
family occasion festival
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a family occasion festival
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as New Year or even Songkran festival, she turned to deliberate on
mobile phone
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mobile phones
a mobile phone
rather than talking and make conversation with other relatives.
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issue can be
leading
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led
to isolating
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. In conclusion, it can be seen that these days modern
technology
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could enhance and influence us more socialized via social application in regard with human-being
relationship
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could be easier, faster and closer, but there are some drawbacks of modern
technology
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tend to affect us to be more isolated and less socialized from vicinity and surrounding vibe. There are both benefits and drawbacks that should be considered by each individual to be practice in moderate way in order to maintain us getting involve society amid advancement
technology
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