Some people believe that technology has made men more sociable, and others think that it has made us less sociable. Discuss both views
In these days there are some arguable that doing modern
technology
have been done human-being relationship
more socialized but
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socialized, but
other
believe that plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
this
tend
have been decreasing them to less socialized onto human Suggestion
tends
relationship
. In this
essay I will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of these viewpoints in details before the conclusion is reached.
On the one hand, many people suggest that modern technology
have been done
human being Suggestion
has been done
relationship
to be more socialized. It can be seen that development and advancement
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advanced
technology
in terms of the internet can be widespread and breakthrough us via several of social applications such
as facebook
, Suggestion
Facebook
youtube
and so on. These social applications can lead us keep in touch each other easier, faster and more convenient. Facebook, Suggestion
YouTube
for instance
, people can up-to-date, post, keep in touch in many various kind
of news, photos, private matter, or even communication with others by texting, voicing and video conferencing. Suggestion
kinds
As a result
of modern technology
in these days could have been affected mankind livelihood to be more socialized not only being in domestic, but also
all over the world. In spite of living different
continents, we could keep in touch just one clicking on electronic devices Suggestion
of living in different
such
as smartphones and laptops to be closer and get involve
in modern society.
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involved
On the other hand
, it can be noticeable
that some people can be isolating and less sociable due to Suggestion
noticed
advancement
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advancing
advanced
technology
. It can be seen that these days most of people tend to pay attention on technology
devices such
as smartphones, laptop and computer rather than conversation face-to-face with family members and surrounding friends. As a result
of this
issue, it can be impacted human being relationship
to be decreasing and less socialized eventually. Suggestion
relates
relating
For instance
, my cousin addicted with smartphones
and social application. When all of relatives come to join Suggestion
smart phones
on
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in
family occasion festival
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a family occasion festival
such
as New Year or even Songkran festival, she turned to deliberate on mobile phone
rather than talking and make conversation with other relatives. Suggestion
mobile phones
a mobile phone
This
issue can be leading
to isolating Suggestion
led
consequently
.
In conclusion, it can be seen that these days modern technology
could enhance and influence us more socialized via social application in regard with human-being relationship
could be easier, faster and closer, but there are some drawbacks of modern technology
tend to affect us to be more isolated and less socialized from vicinity and surrounding vibe. There are both benefits and drawbacks that should be considered by each individual to be practice in moderate way in order to maintain us getting involve society amid advancement technology
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