Nowadays, most large companies operate multi-nationally. To what extent those companies should have responsibility towards local communities in which they operate? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Most large
enterpises
a purposeful or industrious undertaking (especially one that requires effort or boldness)
enterprises
are developing their market overseas and base their headquarters in
tremendously
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tremendous
countries
.
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.
It is true that companies should pay partly attention to social responsibility
,
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,
especially
to
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in
the areas where these companies are located.  Accountability to where
incorporatons
consolidating two or more things; union in (or into) one body
incorporation
incorporations
incorporating
exploit
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exploits
are very necessary.
Firstly
, to a social perspective, multinational companies should ensure their workers 's quality life by education and
heath
a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease
health
services, especially support for workers who have
disachantaged
life.
For example
, the companies can
reward prize
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reward, prize
money or Some kind of meaningful present for employees who efforts a lot
at
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of
working.
In addition
, multi - national
comapanies
an institution created to conduct business
companies
should avoid some horrors vice in
labor industrial
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labour, industrial
labour industrial
child
labor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
, violence
,
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,
unhealthy working
conotitions
the prevailing context that influences the performance or the outcome of a process
conditions
and owe age. Beside of that, companies may use a proportion of their
profits to support to
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profits to support
local charity
organazation
a group of people who work together
organizations
.
Secondly
, to an
enviromental
of or relating to the external conditions or surroundings
environmental
perspective
,
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,
it will be a theme that companies should priority attention to if they decide to
bage
a flexible container with a single opening
bag
barge
beg
their office in other countries. Some local
communities
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community's
community
survival
depend
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depends
on their natural resources so exploiting without controlling and safeguard seem destroying countries where give a chance to make amount of profit.
For instance
, a company which has foreign investment and management named FORMOSA -have
raise
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raised
a big problem for marine pollution because of
chemical waste release
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the chemical waste release
directly to the sea. The government banned going to the beach and controversial to
netizens
about eating seafood. In conclusion, multinational companies should care about responsibility to the countries where they cooperate to if they have enough ability. In case the company enterprises with less
succesful
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
or
have not contribute
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have not contributed
as much for local communities. They can activate in moral ways and provide jobs for local people.

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