The line graph illustrates the number of visitors in millions from the UK who went abroad and those that came to the UK between 1979 and 1999, while the bar chart shows which countries were the most popular for UK residents to visit in 1999.

The line graph illustrates the number of visitors in millions from the UK who went abroad and those that came to the UK between 1979 and 1999, while the bar chart shows which countries were the most popular for UK residents to visit in 1999.
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The given charts indicate the
number
of people who came and moved from the United Kingdom in the period from 1979 to 1999 and
share
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the share
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of
UK
individuals who went overseas in 1990, respectively.
Overall
, it can be seen that the most popular country visited by
UK
residents
was France
whereas
, the less popular country was Turkey.
Besides
, the proportion of
UK
residents
who went abroad
exceed
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the
number
of people who came to the
UK
in the given timescale. Interestingly, the
number
of visitors and
residents
who came to the
UK
and went abroad stood at the same level merely, 10
million
in 1979. The given trend
then
rose significantly to just over 50
million
and approximately just under 30
million
. The given trends had an upward trend during the period.
In
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the other hand, in 1999 the
number
of
UK
people who moved to Spain is almost equal to
France
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France's
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visitors, respectively 9
million
and just over 10
million
. Fewer
UK
residents
moved to Greece than the USA, nearly 4
million
and 5
million
,
accordingly
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, uk, residents, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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