Some people think that the government is wasting on arts that this money could be spent elsewhere to what extent do u agree or disagree with this

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the products of human creativity; works of art collectively
Art
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the arts
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a message that is stated or declared; a communication (oral or written) setting forth particulars or facts etc
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statements
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There
are several reasons why g
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the government
should spend money on arts
first
and foremost
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the arts
reflect the culture of a country and promotes people to understand the culture and architecture.
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Second
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arts sector employees many people
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For
an instance
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rtists like singer and dancer have huge fan following
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housands of people watched t
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of them or themselves
their
shows
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Such
events provide employment to hundreds of people.
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addition to it
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the arts
have an important impact on the of quality of life
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For
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example, people
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ets
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get
pleasure in going to see music and theatre performances
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to a very great extent or degree
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it is a very important.
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Last
but not the least
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rts boost the tourism sector and economy
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For
an instance, art galleries attract t
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the
people to visit again and again
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this
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e can stable the economic growth of a country.
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other sectors are most important should receive more f
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funding, but
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the arts
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conclusion,
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believe that the government should spend its funds to all sectors including arts because every sector has its own contribution towards the development of a country.

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