The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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The bar graph below depicts information regarding the global percentages of
population
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and
wealth
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by region.
Overall
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, what stands out is that,
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the North
American
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continent
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and rich Asia-Pacific have the lowest
population
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percentage, they have the highest global
wealth
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.
In contrast
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,
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Africa
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and the rest of the Asian countries have a marginal portion of global
wealth
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but have a considerable share of the global
population
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. With regards to
population
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, the
American
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continent
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comprising
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North
American
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, Latin America and the Caribbean constituted only about 13% of the global figures,
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the rest of the world contributed the remaining 86%. China in the Asian
continent
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has the highest
population
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among
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the world with figures standing at about 24%, which is greater than the entire
population
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of Europe.
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the
American
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continent
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has the lowest global
population
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percentage, it has the largest share of global
wealth
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of
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around 38% with North America much richer than the rest of the
continent
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by a staggering 30%. Most of the Asian and African continents are poor having only 8% of the world's
wealth
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, with an exception of rich Asia-pacific countries that have about 24% of the global
wealth
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.

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