The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant. write at least 150 words.

The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

write at least 150 words.
The bar graph below depicts information regarding the global percentages of
population
and
wealth
by region.
Overall
, what stands out is that,
Although
the North
American
continent
and rich Asia-Pacific have the lowest
population
percentage, they have the highest global
wealth
.
In contrast
,
African
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Africa
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and the rest of the Asian countries have a marginal portion of global
wealth
but have a considerable share of the global
population
. With regards to
population
, the
American
continent
comprising
of
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North
American
, Latin America and the Caribbean constituted only about 13% of the global figures,
whereas
the rest of the world contributed the remaining 86%. China in the Asian
continent
has the highest
population
among
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the world with figures standing at about 24%, which is greater than the entire
population
of Europe.
While
the
American
continent
has the lowest global
population
percentage, it has the largest share of global
wealth
of
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at
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around 38% with North America much richer than the rest of the
continent
by a staggering 30%. Most of the Asian and African continents are poor having only 8% of the world's
wealth
, with an exception of rich Asia-pacific countries that have about 24% of the global
wealth
.

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