Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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. Artists should be given freedom to some extent under which they can build their ideas although
few argue that they should be allowed fully to express their art
. Despite the few negative influences they might bring in some youngsters, Its benefits to the
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far outweigh the negative impact. Artistry can encourage the
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For instance
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happens when singers and actors promote alcohol in their songs, which may lead many youngsters towards drinking. As a result
, If such
negativity through art
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it may divert many teenagers to
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However
, not every singer or actor promotes such
things, so young adults should look up to the right celebs to follow. On the other side, art
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as poverty, inequality and atrocities. For example
, if the documentary is made on the dwellers of the slums, it can create awareness among people about their living conditions, Which can highlight such
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people. Therefore
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While
artists may bring a minor negative effect to the youth as they showcase drinking in songs, But
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can positively reflect the neglected problems of Correct pronoun usage
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such
as poverty. So I believe that,
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion