STUDENTS SHOULD BE TAUGHT ACADEMIC KNOWLEDGE SO THAT THEY CAN PASS EXAMS, AND SKILLS SUCH AS COOKING OR DRESSING SHOULD NOT BE TAUGHT. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE/DISAGREE

In
this
modern world the main requirements of most people are that students ought to learn more academic knowledge so as to be able to pass the exams.
However
, I strongly claim that the skills
such
as cooking and dressing are
also
be
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being
taught so that they can use these abilities in
every day
found in the ordinary course of events
everyday
life. In
this
essay I will attempt to throw light on both aspects of
this
argument and reach a reasoned conclusion. On the one hand, academic education and qualification are really needed in the future career of students. What I mean by
this
is that even though academic knowledge is demanded only to pass the exams of schools or colleges, is academic qualification required by any company to possess a good working position and satisfying wage.
On the other hand
, skills to cook and dress are very beneficial in
undergraduates’ lifetime
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an undergraduates’ lifetime, although
an undergraduates’ lifetime although
although
both of them are not included in
school programme
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the school programme
school programmes
. It is mainly because, after graduating from schools or
colleges
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college
students can undoubtedly choose to go abroad to study, if they are
taught to easily
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easily taught to
take care of themselves with aforementioned abilities.
Additionally
, with learning
such
necessary life skills students are capable of succeeding
in
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at
work
. Because even at
work
they not only should
work
efficiently, but
also
they have to follow the rules of culture of dressing. It means, being taught how to dress suitably in various situations and behaving properly can make
positive impression
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a positive impression
on consumers and other people. In conclusion, in my point of view, though academic knowledge is important for passing the exams, the skills
such
as cooking and dressing have to be taught to students to have a balanced life in both
work
and lifetime.
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