Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as Sahara Desert and Antarctica. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

disha
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Disha
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refers to the speaker or writer
I
know you are much upset because of me
,
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,
I don’t want to say anything in my explanation
,
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,
the reason of not get
marry
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married
right now
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
have told you already earlier. Yesterday
,
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,
Your sister told you that
may be
by chance
maybe
I am using you and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
think you are
also
feeling like that.But
seriously I
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seriously, I
am not from one of those boys, who used the girls for their own purposes.I
genuinely likes
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genuinely like
you
.
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.
You are
such
a sweet
,
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,
humble and helpful
.
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.
I had never met a girl like you before.Except Kriti
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
had never hurt a person before or played with
there
of them or themselves
their
emotions.I had never wanted to come close to you, even you and I had tried many times before that we should not
seeing
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see
each other again and keep away from each others
,
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,
But every
time
we failed to do that.But now
this
is the high
time
and we need to control our
feeling
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feelings
. I was wondering that we could be good
friends but
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friends, but
the closeness between us
,
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,
it won't let that happen
.
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.
I do not want that
time
to come when someone say that
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
use girls
,
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,
that shall have been an embarrassing moment for me.Yesterday, your sister told you about
may be
by chance
maybe
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
am using you and maybe after some
time
your roommates will have been telling you the same. I request you please forgive
me I
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me, I
can't take
this
tag in
future
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the future
. You should focus on
your self
reflexive form of "you"
yourself
and I promise I would never
.
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.
You should focus on yourself and you should put me
into
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in
your block-list and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
think
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
deserve
this
. But now we should maintain some distance.
that
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That
will be better for both of us
.
Accept space
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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