You have paid for a cricket course at a Sports Club, but due to a medical reason cannot complete the entire course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible

Dear Sir, I’m a 26-year-old student and currently persuading Bachelor’s degree-3rd year, in
this
college which is a 4-year course. I’m writing
this
letter to let you know
my
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interest in
cricket
and a problem I had to face recently. I always had a keen interest in playing
cricket
. Being a big fan of Sachin and Lara, I wished I could play
in
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international
cricket
once. While in school, with my work hard, I grabbed my place among 11 wonderful players in
school
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cricket
team. Now I wish to get an opportunity to play under
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excellent supervision and flourish my talent. Meanwhile, I
first
enrolled for the course
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online
on
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last
Monday. But I met with an accident 2 days before and my leg got fractured. With deep regret, I have to inform you that It is impossible
to
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me to play
on
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this
season. Sadly, given my circumstances, I would have to discontinue my membership.
Thus
, I kindly request you to refund me the amount which I paid. Please advise should there be any particular form that I need to fill in. Thank you. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours’s
sincerely
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, Silpa Sujith

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