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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?

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Although
 the agriculture has been developing and upgrading very fast, more machines were built for
har
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to
vest, famine still happen around the world. These problems due to several reasons and there would be some possible solutions.
To begin
 with, there are two main reasons of starvation.
Firstly
, people living under the poor could not afford or grow nutr
ients
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nutrient
food
 for meals. They might not have a stab
ility job
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stable
 with stable income, go along with that, many people give birth at very
young age, wh
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a very young age
ich contributes to the life burden.
Moreover
, many nations in Africa, they are prone to have severe diseases like Ebola and HIV/AIIDS, so that the workforce is reduced and could not cultivate.
Secondly
, the distribution of
food
 might undergo several difficulties. They deliver
food
 for long distance and those small amounts of good road are used by local transportations; the speed would definitely be slow down.
As a result
, the portion of the of the nutrient might be lost and hungers have to wait for a long time.
However
, I would suggest two solutions in order to address
this
 issue. The most critical one is that the government should order efficient policies so as to deter those serious diseases.
Furthermore
, they could promote farmers, so that they would learn how to grow their fields. Providing more jobs to a
b
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for
etter standard of living.
In addition
, competent authorities should invest on m
or
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in
e
high-qua
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higher
lity infrastructures. In conclusion, it is clear-cut that many people in the world do not have adequate
food
 for living owing to indigenous issues, and low-quality facilities.
Nevertheless
, there would be several reso
lutions to
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resolved
mitigate
this
 problem.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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