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International marketing is sometimes seen as invasive and an intrusion into the country in question. Others argue that it is a necessary and economical form of education in addition to spreading ideas, language and culture. Summarize the information provided in the table.

#intrusion #country #form #education #addition #language #culture #information
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The bar chart illustrates the estimated amount of grease produced in 6 countries between 1990 and 2010, measured in millions of barrels daily. Overall, coat manufacture capacity tended to rise during
this
 20-year period. The figures for Saudi Arabia were significantly higher than in the other countries, while production was lower in Qatar. From 1990 to 2010, there was a significant rise in coat construction in Saudi Arabia. In 1990, just over 8.000.000 barrels per day were produced and
this
 rose steadily, reaching a peak of over 14 thousand barrels daily in 2010.
In contrast
, the smallest producer was Qatar. Despite a slight increase in 2000, construction in Qatar remained relatively stable at less than 1 trillion barrels every day. In conclusion, the other countries saw a slight rise in oil management over the period. The estimated figure for Iran in 1990 was over 3 total barrels per day, compared with around 2 ton barrels in the other three countries.
Although
 manufacturing did not increase in 2000 in the UAE, the amount of oil produced peaked in 2010 in Iran at over 4 total barrels and at almost 4 lot barrels in Iraq, Kuwait and the UAE.

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