In many countries children are engaged in some kid of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong,while other consider it as valuabl work .what is your opinion?

No one can deny the fact that a significant amount of youngsters is engaged in paid jobs in many developed and developing countries.Recently

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topic has become an open discussion in the society.Parents and some people believe that the paid

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enlighten their lives, while other social commuters think

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gives adverse effect on a child's life.In my point of view, I'm inclined to believe that kids should allow to be engaged in paid work with a proper supervision.

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with, most of students in developed countries do some jobs for earning after their school time, even their economy in a solid state.

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, japan is a developed country which has a stable economic growth, allow their children to

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after their academic time.

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, having a

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experience with a sound academic performance in a certain younger age helps them to climb upward in the career ladder, which may open thousands of avenues.

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it is instrumental in moulding a sound personality.

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, it is true the fact that millions of innocent children are being exploited for labour all over the world.

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, the kids are used to earn money

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they have easily fallen pray to antisocial activities

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as drug trafficking, child prostitution, due to their lack of experience. In conclusion, I believe that, kids are engaged in some paid

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with a balanced educational career, Helps to develop a sound attitude rich personality, While the responsible people keep an eye on them.