Countries are becoming more and more similliar because are able to by the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

It is true that the globalization has made the world a global village and the countries are like similar. These days, people use the same items any part of the world use the same technologies, customer buy international band product.
However
, I strongly believe that
this
is a positive impact for every
countries
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country
. To start with, there are lots of
reason
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reasons
why I said
this
is a positive development.
First reason
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The first reason
is that, when any
country
import some product from other
countries
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countries, then
then
it will build up
good interpersonal relationship
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a good interpersonal relationship
good interpersonal relationships
for both countries by the supporting of economic condition.
For example
, USA one of the top one
country
for selling
Jeep car
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a Jeep car
, Ferrari car. So when any
country
will import
this types
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these types
this type
of car from
USA it
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USA, it
will bring good relationship. Sometimes the
develop
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developing
country
they help the poor
country
by the following business ratio. What is more, now we buy international band product from
showroom
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the showroom
fom
a giver or sender
from
foam
Samsung, LG, Sony and many more. So, to make customer satisfaction many
company
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companies
open
there
of them or themselves
their
branch in different countries.
As a result
, many unemployment person those who are jobless they find out job field. By doing
company
job they can lead their family.
On the other hand
,
government
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the government
also get
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also gets
has also got
is also getting
has also gotten
some tax form
this
company
. And
this
tax is needed for making our infrastructure, good transportation system and so on. To conclude, by considering the above mentioned positive development I must say that by doing export-import business and people working many
company
branches it develop every
country
economic condition.

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