Some people think that the study of history is of little use to us. others believe that studying history helps us to know the present. discuss both viewpoints and give your opinion .

Few persons believe that

history

subject has not importance as much as other subjects have. Whereas others think that it's a study which helps people to know about the current state. Both the statement must be explained. I think, historical has the same importance like other topics. In an initial statement, people believe that the past is not important because, now a day past cannot be helpful in the career manner. Other subjects like science has more significance than

history

. Technology has become so advanced that

history

became the minor subject in the education system. Another scenario explains about the attention of the past in the present time. By taking the inspiration from older days, medical treatment has been developed so well in the form of "Aayurveda", "Suergery" etc. With the help of knowledge of older days, many places have been found like "Lothal" which is situated in Ahmedabad city in Gujarat state. Mythological stories are the best and precious part of Indian past. Indian

history

is very famous in all over the world. Adults, teenagers must know the Significance of older days, by

this

, they will value the legacies of India. Many historical places are developed in a country to aware people and give respect to legacy. In conclusion, I would like to give my opinion towards the importance of old stories which plays a significant role in the present life. If

history

will disappear, that would be the disrespect of Indian legacies. To prevent that problem, priority should be given by people.

Mon Mar 30 2020

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historical knowledge
analyzing historical events
critical thinking
evidence-based reasoning
contemporary issues
practical benefit
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interpretations
biased
misunderstandings
pragmatic value
rapidly changing world

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Government should invest in teaching science subjects rather than other subjects for country development and progress. To what extent do you agree or not agree?