It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn his distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with his opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

In

child

rearing, it is essential to give children proper education on differentiating what is good or bad.

Accordingly

, some people may argue that

punishment

is an indispensable way

for

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of

teaching good

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

to children;

however

, I strongly believe that

punishment

actually leads to more undesirable acts.

Instead

of punishing children, encouraging them by considering alternative consequences

such

as using a direct language and being a role-model can be applied by both parents and teachers would be better.

Firstly

, a couple of reasons should be primarily cited in order to show how bad

punishment

is. One of them is that it could cause a backfire and result in rebellion. To exemplify, if a

child

has a strong character, inflicting too much pressure may surely lead to his or her outburst.

This

not only makes a

child

angry

individual but

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individual, but

also

constitutes a risk for their future. Suppressing self-confidence can be mentioned as a

further

factor for the

unnecessity

the condition of being essential or indispensable

necessity

of

punishment

. To illustrate, scientific studies conducted on ‘The Impacts of

Punishment

on Children’ in 2008 have shown that children who had been punished vigorously during their early years formed a criminal profile in their adulthood.

That is

to say, it can be clearly detected that children brought up to have self-esteem have a tendency to commit crimes compared to the ones grown as a confident individual. As to what kind of alternatives could be applied, one of them appears to be as direct communication with the

child

and simply warning about what they have just done is wrong. Most children do not like to be treated as children. To explain it

further

, talking to them directly and explaining the reasons why their behaviour cannot be accepted would be way better than just ordering them to go to their beds and not come out in a certain period of time. While doing that parents and teachers at school should be calm. Because an angry tone does not work in that kind of situations.

Second alternative

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The second alternative

A second alternative

is actually a task given to us as adults. Children tend to copy what they see from adults.

For instance

, a

child

with parents who are judges or lawyers can learn from them to be a fair person. If parents at home and officials at

school

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the school

have a good morale and are not exploited by the requirements of the real world,

this

makes an effective role-model for the children.

Last

but not least, unlike some people claiming that

punishment

is a requisite when nurturing a

child

, in my opinion, it might not form anticipated results and easily lead to raise a bad-tempered

child

. Rather than giving

punishment

, using a direct and calm language about the unwanted behaviours and displaying as

role-model

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a role - model

by not just pretending but actually meaning it should be preferred. To be precise, these two are essential for the upbringing of the young generation.