The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920

Grange
Park
was opened in 1920, a rectangular
area
with access from Arnold Avenue on the north side and from Eldon Street on the south side. There was a fountain in the
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
, with a stage for musicians situated
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
left, a glasshouse to the right of the Eldon Street entrance and a pond for
water
plants in the northeast corner opposite. Around the edges of the
park
there were rose gardens, with seats nearby for people to smell the flowers and listen to music. The
park
has altered considerably since
then
. Now there is one large-
ish
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is
rose garden, occupying the central
area
where the fountain stood, and with seats all around it. One of the smaller rose gardens remains on the north side of the
park
. The bandstand (stage for musicians) has
also
been replaced, by an
amphitheater
a sloping gallery with seats for spectators (as in an operating room or theater)
amphitheatre
for concerts and associated seating. The glasshouse has gone and in its places is a
water
feature;
similarly
, where the pond for
water
plants
stood there
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stood, there
is now a children's play
area
with a cafe nearby. Access to the
park
is still via the two original entrances, but there is now a
third
entrance near the
water
feature from an underground car
park
. Despite the
apparently
Suggestion
apparent
significant changes, the
park
retains the basic elements of flowers,
water
, seating and music, with the addition of a cafe and a children’s play
area
.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • recreational facilities
  • landscaping
  • naturalistic
  • amenities
  • formal gardens
  • ergonomic
  • symmetric designs
  • inclusive
  • accessible
  • accommodations
  • native plant species
  • societal changes
  • visitor services
  • community events
  • evolution
  • modern playgrounds
  • wildflower meadows
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