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in the past, when students did a university degree,they tended to study in their own country nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this development you should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

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Why would a student choose to study abroad? Why would someone
movther
a woman who has given birth to a child (also used as a term of address to your mother)
mother
 country
,
Accept space
,
 and
leave
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leaves
 his or her whole life behind? There are many advantages and disadvantages to choose to live abroad.
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 the one hand, studying abroad is one of the biggest advantages
yhat
pointing out something
that
 a college student can experience during his or her college career. While studying abroad, a person can learn valuable lessons and take those experiences home home to create and contribute to the society of their homeland.
For example
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, students all over the United States have taken
advantages
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advantage
 of
this
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 experience and
syudy
be a student; follow a course of study; be enrolled at an institute of learning
study
 abroad for a once in a lifetime opportunity. It
also
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 allows you to discover
new culture
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new cultures
a new culture
,
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,
and to be more open minded.
Furthermore
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, it permits you to learn a new way of learning, Indeed, each country has a different approach to teaching.
On the other hand
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,
syudying
reading carefully with intent to remember
studying
 in another country is hard
becouse
for the reason that; on account of
because
 everything is new and you do not have your familiar safety net of friends and
famiy
a social unit living together
family
. You will have to face a different culture
,
Accept space
,
other
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
,
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,
 and some can make you feel uncomfortable if you are not used to them
:
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:
in the United State people are very outgoing and strike up a conversation with strangers on
th
definite article
the
 bus
,
Accept space
,
 whereas in Europe
,
Accept space
,
 talking to a stranger you will probably get you an angry look or might even scare people away. In conclusion,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 completely support the view that students have to try studying abroad if they have the opportunity.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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