Scientists use living animal to carry our research. Some people think it is interesting, while some other people think it is cruel. What do you think?

There is
issue
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an issue
the issue
with using the living animals as a scientific experimental tool. Some part of society finds it useful for development of science, when the other part finds it as
act
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an act
the act
of the violence. I believe that scientific research should carry out experiments on animals, because of lack of alternatives and efficiency of experiments. Most of animals are used for the chemical or medicine advancement to improve on
humans
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human
humans'
lives whereas
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lives, whereas
animal protection groups claim that the animal testing is too cruel. It is a fact that the animal testing had developed human’s lives. Cloning,
curing
feeling and exhibiting concern and empathy for others
caring
for a cancer, AIDS, vaccines, organ transplants and any other viruses are the example of the quality of life improved. The recent science technologies are in the beginning of the process of kidney and heart transplanting. All those experiments are followed by Animals Act 1986;
thus
the testing is done in a safe measure.
Therefore it
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Therefore, it
is not so
cruelly
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cruel
, but has high efficiency for progress. The scientific researches ought to carry out laboratory works on animals, because there is no other way or alternatives. As we know, robots can’t be tested
by
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with
drugs and people do not create
biomechanical
organism that can react as living organisms
such
as human, animals. In lab people use more little mammals as
mouse
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a mouse
mice
.
Mouse
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The mouse
has big population and small size. That’s why is making experiments will not affect to number of mouse.
Therefore
, people are needed to use animals. In conclusion, animals should be used for scientific experiments. Animals should not be hurt without any meaning or purpose, but comparing to scientific research, we are compelled to hurt them, because animals are necessary
of
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to
for
use in product development and we do not have
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
way for making tests.
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