Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is considered that the society would be safer if the capital punishment would be available.

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belief exists because some people think that crimes are caused due to lack of punishment

such

as the death penalty.

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statement, for the reason that I strongly support the idea of what the violation of right humans, only can bring more violence. In cultures from the Middle East, there are stronger penalties t

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could scare the thief to doing bad actions. Yet

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