The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first pie chart illustrates the

proportion

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of

energy

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consumption whilst the

second

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chart demonstrates the data on

greenhouse

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gas

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emissions by the respective activities in an average Australian family.

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,

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the

energy

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used in heating keeps the major part, the activity

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that contributes

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contributes

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contributing

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the largest

proportion

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of

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gas

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emission

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emissions

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is water heating.

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This

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means, if an activity consumes much

energy

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, it is not sufficient to make sure that it emits the largest amount of

greenhouse

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gas

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.

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nearly

a

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apply

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half of

total

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the total

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energy

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(42%) is spent on heating, only 15%

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greenhouse

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of greenhouse

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gas

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emitted

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is emitted

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by

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activity.

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, the

proportion

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of

energy

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use and

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gas

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are

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approximately the same for water heating (30%,

32

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and 32

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%, respectively) and

the

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apply

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cooling (2%,

3

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and 3

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% respectively).

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, there are some of the activities that

energy

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use

proportion

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is just nearly

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apply

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half of

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proportion

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the proportion

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of

greenhouse

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gas

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they emit,

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as refrigeration, lighting and other appliances.