The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first pie chart illustrates the

proportion

of

energy

consumption whilst the

second

chart demonstrates the data on

greenhouse

gas

emissions by the respective activities in an average Australian family.

Overall

,

while

the

energy

used in heating keeps the major part, the activity

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that contributes

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contributes

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contributing

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the largest

proportion

of

greenhouse

gas

emission

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emissions

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is water heating.

Which

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This

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means, if an activity consumes much

energy

, it is not sufficient to make sure that it emits the largest amount of

greenhouse

gas

.

Although

nearly

a

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apply

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half of

total

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the total

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energy

(42%) is spent on heating, only 15%

greenhouse

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of greenhouse

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gas

emitted

Add a missing verb

is emitted

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by

this

activity.

On the other hand

, the

proportion

of

energy

use and

greenhouse

gas

are

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is

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approximately the same for water heating (30%,

32

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and 32

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%, respectively) and

the

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apply

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cooling (2%,

3

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and 3

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% respectively).

Besides

, there are some of the activities that

energy

use

proportion

is just nearly

a

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apply

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half of

proportion

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the proportion

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of

greenhouse

gas

they emit,

such

as refrigeration, lighting and other appliances.