Most people prefer ready to eat food rather than homemade food now. Do you think it has more advantages or more disadvantages.

Urbanization and modernization has fast paced our daily routines. Many people argue that processed
food
, which is easy to cook in
few minutes
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a few minutes
, is the best
option
to eat. While others opine that freshly cooked
food
is the best
food
for a healthy body and mind. I personally feel, that ready to eat meals have more shortfalls than its benefits. On the one hand, people who are in
favor
promote over another
favour
of processed
food
argue that ready to eat meals
provide
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provided
them with the best
option
, as these meals are
widey
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wide y
available at all places and do not require much effort to make them ready to eat. They
also
argue that
this
type of
food
also
retains most of its
nutrion
(physiology) the organic process of nourishing or being nourished; the processes by which an organism assimilates food and uses it for growth and maintenance
nutrition
nutrient
value. Ready to eat meals generally costs less than the
option
of cooking fresh
food
.
Moreover
, it saves the most precious time, which can be
further
used effectively in doing some work. On the flip side,
this
processed
food
when consumed for a
longer
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long
duration can result in various detrimental effects on one's
health
. They contain
high
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high amounts
a high amount
amount
of
sturated
being the most concentrated solution possible at a given temperature; unable to dissolve still more of a substance
saturated
fat and sodium, which can gradually make people obese and unhealthy. These ready to eat meals contains high
amount
of preservatives, which have
direct effect
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a direct effect
on human's mental and physical
health
, especially
on
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in
of
with
cognitive and kinetic development of an offspring.
Although
, homemade
food
takes time to get ready and is
costlier
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a costly option
costly option
option
than the former, but
this
freshly cooked
food
has all
health
benefits, as it has
highest
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the highest amount
high amount
the higher amount
amount
of nutrition value. It supplies all essential vitamins and minerals that are required by a human body.
Recent study
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A recent study
Recent studies
from Harvard says that in developed countries like UK and US, since the disposable income is much more than other countries, people
has become
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have become
more fond
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fonder
of ready to eat meals, and
hence
, these countries have
maximum
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the maximum amount
a maximum amount
amount
of
obese
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obesity
cases. To sum up, I strongly contend that though ready to eat meals have cost and time benefits that make
this
option
much more convenient, but, there is no comparison to the home cooked
food
. Since, home cooked
food
is best for right cognitive and physical
health
of people, needless to say that its pros outweighs is
cons
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a cons
.
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