Some people say that teenagers should work part-time and earn money. This way they will learn basic lessons about work and become more disciplined. Others argue that teenagers shouldn’t sacrifice their rest and after-school activities to work. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

These days the question if the teenagers should work part-

time

and earn money is the main topic between adults.

This

essay will discuss the problem and the solutions about

this

. If teenagers start working during high school, it will guarantee them to be more mature earlier than other children.

Therefore they

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Therefore, they

need to handle their

time

and to organize it well.

On the other

hand they

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hand, they

won’t have that much free

time

to do everything. It could be stressful and tiring. Eventually they will need to make a decision what they want. Do they need

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a diploma

or basic job without an opportunity to be promoted? In my opinion the best solution for teenagers is to go to school and during holidays to find some part-

time

job. Teenagers during

school year

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the school year

will have enough

time

to study and go out and during

vacation

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the vacation

they will have an opportunity to work and earn money and

also

have free

time

for themselves. Parents will be proud if their child

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chooses

this

way, because the child will seem to be more mature and careful about money.

Finally both

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Finally, both

sides will be happy. I thing

this

is the best way to be prepared for the rest of your life. In conclusion, teenagers have to be aware how to organize their

time

in the best way and to try to learn as much as they can. Because only like that they will have enough confidence about their future and they will know how to make good decisions.