Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resources, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, gas and coal are essential for many industries, and not using them will lead to economic collapse. What is your opinion? Support your point of view with relevant examples.

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Climate change is a serious problem for the past years, and it became a worldwide issue. Many environmental activists are trying to recover the Earth with the new alternative

energy

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resources to run the industrial machine rather than using the fossil fuels. Alternative

energy

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resources are the main idea

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developed nowadays. The reason behind

this

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idea is these resources can be renewable and it cannot harm the natural surroundings.

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, it can be cheaper than fossil fuels for long time usage.

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, Netherland is a windy country and it uses the wind to produce electricity around the country.

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Therefore, it

has lessened its air pollution.

This

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can be compared to Indonesia, which still uses fossil fuels as the main source.

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, The air pollution becomes an enormous problem in

this

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country because fossil fuels generate harmful gasses that are dangerous to the human’s respiratory system.

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, natural

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resources may

also

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bring a drawback. Since we are depending on a natural phenomenon, when they do not happen as we expected, (insert comma here) it will disrupt the industrial activities.

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, when Netherland is in summer, which is dry and hot, the electrical power source will have some troubles caused by the lack of wind.

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, the industries can not use the electricity like they usually use. In the end, it will bring a negative impact,

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as lowering their productivity, which will lessen their revenue. Overall, we can conclude that

energy

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resource is very useful to protect our natural environment from chemical residues. In order to keep it sustainable, we need to gain some additional alternative resources to replace the

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alternative resource when it does not work.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

285 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

mitigate
renewable energy sources
economic collapse
fossil fuels
solar power
wind energy
alternative resources
clean energy
technological advancements
government subsidies
energy transition
reliability
job creation
economic benefits
global warming
carbon footprint
sustainability
innovation
infrastructure
regulatory framework
energy efficiency
climate resilience
decarbonization
socioeconomic impact
energy security

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Include an introduction and conclusion

There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

Some people believe that it is better to have the same job throughout their life, while others think that people should change their job after some period of time. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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