Genetic engineering is a dangerous trend. It should be limited. To what extend do you agree?

Due to the technological sophisticated world which we live in, genetic engineering
is becomes
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has become
is becoming
some people concern
as a result
of
enormouse
extraordinarily large in size or extent or amount or power or degree
enormous
development and they reckon
this
science
should be restricted. I totally disagree with
this
opinion due to the reasons which I mention in
this
essay.
Firstly
, it is clear that genetic engineering brought huge benefits to people’s life in terms of fruit and vegetable productions. As a regards of
this
technology overwhelmed
amount
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the amount
of crops can produce so that more export opportunities
are gain
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are also gaining
are gaining also
also
more people can take initial routine needs of their life easily.
Secondly
, another advantage of genetic engineering is on health.
This
phenomenon helps
science
to develop new methods in curing multiple
health disease
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health, disease
such
as cancer,
alzheimer
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Alzheimer
and
this
effort help
lots
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lot
of people to be cured and have
chance
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a chance
the chance
to live without even pain with assistant of
this
gene therapy. On the flip side, some critics claim other aspects of genetic engineering. They believed that the crops which produce with
this
science
are not
nutrition enough
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enough nutrition
for body as some hormones are injected to fruits so that they can
defeats
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defeat
harmful pests but these products are unnatural and they can harm people’s body.
Also some
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Also, some
other concern about ethical problems which it could
leads
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lead
as
result
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a result
of no limitations. But limitations is not going to work and will may cause to encourage
sciences
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the sciences
to uncover even new and harmful technology for society and
also
this
will avoids
humans
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human
benefits which they gain from
this
science
. Putting some observation and
strikely
restricted to something
strictly
supervise can really help to be in a correct way of achievement. In conclusion, there are some shortcomings in genetic
engineering but
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engineering, but
is should not restrict and put
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
obstacle in
development
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the development
of technology.

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