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Despite the environmental concerns raised by scientists, people are not changing their life style. Why so? What should be done to encourage the people in order to save environment?

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Environmental concern is certainly a worrying challenge for around the world. Despite of knowing information about the global warming or environmental problem, people do not change their life by taking alternative way. So, in
this
 essay, I will discuss what the behind reason about it, and the action
can be stimulate
Suggestion
can stimulate
 for general people.
TO begin
 with, there are various reasons associated with
this
 trend.
Fast
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Fastest
 of all, the majority of people for showing off their social status they
use
 private
car
such
 as, Land cruiser, Ferrari and so on
instead
 of using public
car
.
As a result
, from the
car
 toxic fumes the world temperature going to upward.
Therefore
, habitat being loss and breath taking problem occurred for human being.
Secondly
, in many countries’ people they have no idea about the recycling. So, they always buy new product. For making new product we
use natural
Accept comma addition
use, natural
 resource as a raw
materials
Suggestion
material
. So
it
it is
it's
 a one kind of bad impact
for
Suggestion
of
 nature. Turning to possible solution, perhaps the most immediate step would be to that, government should encourage for general people to
use
 public transportation system with decorated modern and
convenience
Suggestion
convenient
 way. The result of
this
 that, the global temperature less increase. A
second
 solution is that, if education plan in schools, or college concentration to the plant and environment,
student
Suggestion
the student
students
 would make awareness and create a better natural life. In conclusion,
this
 is a topic which is very relevant to modern society.
However
, I believe that the best solution is if
general people
Accept comma addition
general, people
use
 public
car
 and government provide some recycling industry these all would be better for saving
environment
Suggestion
the environment
.
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