The map below show the village of Stockefort in 1930 and in 2010

The map below show the village of Stockefort in 1930 and in 2010
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village
of Stokeford
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1930 and 2010.
Overall
, in the past, there were some houses in the middle
village
, and there was a large house in the gardens
area
near a primary school in the east, and to the northeast of
village
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, there was a bridge. To the west of
village
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, there were two shops,
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and a
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post office, and to the north and south of
village
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, there were two farmland areas;
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, there was a long river from south to north.
Over development
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, there are many changes
such
as retirement
home
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homes
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, but bridge
area
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areas
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, river stoke, houses, primary
school
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schools
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and post office areas remain the same with changes in size. In 2010, a lot of houses are built around the
village
. To the east of
village
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,
primary
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the primary
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school
area
is renovated,
besides
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and besides
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gardens
area
is
also
replaced by
retirement
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home
area
, and to the west of
village
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, two shops are demolished.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words village, area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • transformation
  • infrastructure
  • facilities
  • landscape
  • sparse population
  • residential areas
  • commercial zones
  • recreational facilities
  • agricultural lands
  • local economy
  • transportation infrastructure
  • connectivity
  • public amenities
  • green spaces
  • quality of life
  • historical buildings
  • landmarks
  • preservation
  • urban development
  • environmental impacts
  • natural landscapes
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