Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter • explain the reasons for the noise • apologise • describe what action you will take

Dear
Mrs.
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Smith, I am writing to you about the written complaint that you send to our landlord with regards to
clatter
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the clatter
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that came from my apartment. I started renting
this
place for almost half a year, I’ve noticed that one hanging cabinet in the kitchen was not properly attached to the wall, I’m afraid that in due time it will fall and may cause a lot of problems and damages. Now, in order to avoid some risk, I hired someone a carpenter to fix it, and his assessment, it needs a lot of work and effort to put back that cabinet properly and carefully,
thus
needing special tools and drilling device to install it accurately and precisely against the wall, which causes
a lots
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of noise. I know that while fixing these things, it brings uncomfortable to my fellow tenants in the apartment building, so with all sincerity and humbleness I ask for
apology
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for the inconvenience and discomfort for noises that came from my unit. In
this
matter, I talked to the man who
do
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the job to double time and to finish the task as soon as possible even when I need to pay an extra payment. He assured
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me that he is going to complete the job
till
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by
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this
afternoon. Hope that
this
written letter will give you some relief that sooner, it all back to
normal
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, quiet, and peaceful place. Sincerely yours,
Juvy
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July
Penpina
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Penina

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