Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Is this a positive or negative development

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Today many

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Today, many

people rely on technologies for many aspects of their lives, mainly for working and communication.

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Doubtlessly

, technologies provide endless opportunities for people relating their jobs or education,

however

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however, this

this

is not valid for people's relationships with one another. Technologies have left a big impact on how people communicate with each other. Years

ago before

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ago, before

modern technologies came into people's

lifes

a characteristic state or mode of living

lives

, to meet someone you will have to go out. Friends met

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pubs or restaurants to spend hours talking to each other, they preferred to spend every minute they were free outside socialising with others. Now, people do not feel the need to leave the comfort of their homes to talk to a loved one as they can use different social sites or apps,

such

as Facebook, Skype or Viber. Even they can use camera and video chats to see each other.

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Grammar mistakes
 

2 paragraphs

144 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Interact
Social media platforms
Networking
Instant messaging
Face-to-face interaction
Misunderstandings
Emotional context
Superficial connections
Deceptive identities
Privacy concerns
Social skills
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Online presence
Digital communication
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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Is this a positive or negative development

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