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The plans below show Ashford in 2010 and Ashford now.

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The maps demonstrate some changes that were made to an Ashford city over two different time periods 2010 and the present.Overall, It's clear that there have been significant changes in infrastructure
,
Accept space
,
accommodation and other facilities. According to the maps In 2010, northwest there was trees and river Tam is located at the centre of Ashford city.It separates the city.To the east side there was housing area.
Secondly
 The most noticeable additions in the southeast are considerable growth in the trees and yacht marina was constructed at the edge of the river.
Furthermore
 the main road was extended and a new bridge built over the river.While in the northeast has
also
 developed a housing estate.
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