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In some countries, people follow the latest fashion and hairstyles. In your opinion, what is influencing this? Is this a good or bad thing?

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Citizens of some nations tend to keep up with the latest
fashion
 and hairstyles. In my opinion, celebrity influence is the root cause of
this
 trend and it is a bad thing.
Firstly
,
this
 essay will discuss how it changes the
personality
 of the person and
secondly
, how the compulsive urge to stay updated with
fashion
 can be a problematic factor when it comes to finances. A person may become prone to
personality
 disorders when they are overly influenced by a celebrity.
Instead
 of being true to their own self, they start imitating the famous person and become a victim of identity crisis.
For example
, there has been a case in South India / in the southern region of
India where
Accept comma addition
India, where
 a regular
house-wife
a wife who manages a household while her husband earns the family income
housewife
 after being influenced by an actor lost her own
personality
. She started maintaining the same looks as the said actor and ended up in a failed marriage because her
personality
 altered
with
Suggestion
by
 the appearance. Following the latest
fashion
 means maintaining an updated wardrobe.
Although
 there may exist a fake/copy of that designer piece, it certainly will not be cheap.
Fashion
 keeps on changing from time to time and being a regular shopper will definitely drain a lot of money that could have been put to a better use.
For example
, a friend of mine spent a fortune to purchase branded clothes only to find out that it became out of
fashion
 / it became dated the very
next
 year. To conclude, the practice of following
latest
Suggestion
the latest
fashion
 under the influence of celebrities should be discouraged as it leads to
personality
 disorders as well as financial distress.
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