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an annual

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number of eaten in three different junk food (

pizza

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,

fish

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and

chips

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, and

hamburgers

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) by teenagers over the period of 25 years in Australia.

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fish

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and

chips

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fell steadily,

while

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number

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of people who consume

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apply

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pizza

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and

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increased gradually and overtook that

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fish

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and

chips

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in 1985 and 1990. In 1975, around 100

fish

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and

chips

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consumed

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by Australian teenagers in a year. Over

following

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five years average yearly eating

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dropped by nearly 83 times, before rising to over 87.

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, there was

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drop of approximately 40 times in the number of

fish

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and

chips

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consumers.

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Figures

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for

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and

hamburgers

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were the least common fast food during 1975 just 5 and 3

respevtively

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respectively

. By 1995 there was a significant growth in

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hamburgers

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hamburger

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eating, it reached a peak at 100 and stood steady and were popular fast food.

Pizza

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eating

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rose gradually, reaching about 85 times yearly in 1995 and the figure remained stable over 5 years.