Doctors should be responsible for educating their patients about how to improve their health. Do you agree with this?

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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324 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

holistic approach
preventive measures
chronic diseases
medical interventions
healthcare professionals
consultations
dietitians
health educators
literacy skills
visual aids
digital tools
reputable online resources
community programs
ongoing support
patient outcomes
initial guidance
mitigated
follow-up consultations

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Doctors should be responsible for educating their patients about how to improve their health. Do you agree with this?

Fully explain your ideas

Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people say that the only way to get success is to go to university while others think that it depends on other factors. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some educators believe that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You are living in a city in a foreign country, and a friend from your home country is soon coming to visit you for several days. Write an email to your friend. In this letter: •ask him/her to bring some things from home which you need •say why you need them •make arrangements to meet him/her

A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.Discuss both views and give your opinion.