Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary school to universities, too much time is spent on leaning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

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A lot of time is wasted on informative

knowledge

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which may not be helpful to students to imbibe applied niche from lower level

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terchery

coming next after the second and just before the fourth in position

tertiary

education.

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essay will argue why practical skills are necessary despite of

small portion

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a small portion

small portions

the small portion

bookinsh

characterized by diligent study and fondness for reading

bookish

knowledge

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should

also

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be part of

teaching system

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the teaching system

teaching systems

. We see schools

have come

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come

up with long and stressful

curriculam

an integrated course of academic studies

curriculum

curricula

curriculums

for children and

specially

to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common

especially

for primary students.

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, learning takes place from books and information than to impart education

through practical approach

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through a practical approach

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, the education does teach a

student

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of fifth grade maths but fails to help make them understand how they can apply these theories in their

furture

the time yet to come

future

career. Having said that, it hardly gives any window to a

student

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to think out of the box for practical applications.

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, to make my point more clear, an MBA students are taught about all the myths of marketing

skills but

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skills, but

when the same

student

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faces difficulties to apply his/her skills on the job.

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can create

uncertainities

being unsettled or in doubt or dependent on chance

uncertainties

within the mind of youth, be it a job

unsatisfaction

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, lack of confidence, or say

tendency

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the tendency

to opt for other career opportunities other than their field of

knowledge

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, it is

also

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clear at

certain point

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a certain point

one needs the basis to impart

knowledge

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. Which means, there has to be collective sources, information

atleast

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at least

to introduce the subject to the students. One cannot

dirctly

without deviation

directly

advice to students to go for a experiments.

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, a chemistry

student

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cannot perform an experiment unless he/she is aware of the chemicals, their properties, characteristics etc. That will become

dangerous situation

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a dangerous situation

for the teachers and a

student

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also

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parents. To conclude, I believe factual information is equally required as is practical

knowledge

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. Both

has

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have

to go hand in hand which can help students to build their bright future.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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dual learning systems
theoretical knowledge
practical application
project-based learning
real-world scenarios
retention
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teamwork
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Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary school to universities, too much time is spent on leaning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

Your opinion

Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are equally responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Charitable organizations increasingly utilize the internet and television to promote their work, a trend driven by technological advancements. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this approach, and provide your opinion with relevant examples and evidence.

Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students.

Developments in technology are causing environmental problems. Some think the solution is for people to adjust to a simper life while others believe that technology itself can solve these problems. Discuss both views and give you opinion.