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With a growing world population one of the most pressing issues is that of feeding such a large number of people. Some people think that GM foods offer a viable solution to this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the contemporary era, there is heated argument over the issue that, with the rapid growth of universe population is the major issues of providing food items to each person.
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 notion, there are myriad things in its favour of GM foods.
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 and foremost, a genetically modified food helps to especially farmers, to cultivate at any desert because these crops easily grown with the assist of chemicals.
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, the farmer earns a big amount of money in a single year after modifying their crops by using the pesticides. They can be grown, their crops easily without any responsibility.
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, it saves their time for other productive work.
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, the nation of Europe, whereas, the farmers able to grow rice with a less amount of water it makes their crops grow faster with the aid of pesticides. On the flip side of the coin some critics go against the above mentioned points.
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, the GM foods is not good for Masses health because it is not planted in an organic way.
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, if a large number of individuals eat GM cuisines. They will be put their lives in danger.
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, these types of certain dishes may have less amount of minerals, proteins and vitamins. So, which are the dreadful for human body development. Hammering the
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 nail, I am of the opinion that it should be helpful to feed the large population.
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, the genetic modified food has some demerits, but it is not Overweight, its merits, which are helping in the universe population.

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